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Harry Potter is written by Joanne Kathleen Rowling. She is an english author. Joanne K. Rowling has written fiction since she was a child, and always wanted to be an author.

One day when she was on a trip from Manchester to London she invented the story of Harry Potter. She offered her first book “Harry Potter and the Philosophers Stone” to many publishing houses. All big publishers in the U.K. were not interested to publish the book. But a small company with the name “Bloomsbury” finally decided to print the work. At this time J. K. Rowling was out of work and very poor. Today she is the second richest woman in the United Kingdom.


What are the books about?
The books are about the life of Harry Potter. Harry Potter is a wizard. When he was a baby his parents were killed by Lord Voldemort. Lord Voldemort is the most powerful black wizard since centuries. He threatens the whole wizard-world. Many wizards don’t pronounce his name because they’re afraid of him. That is why they call him: “You-Know-Who”. Harry Potter is the only one who survived a curse of him. And the amazing thing is that he survived the curse when he was only one year old. Therefore he grew up with his uncle and aunt, so-called “Muggles”. Muggles are normal people like you, you or me. His uncle and aunt treated him very very bad. For example they gave him a very small room without window under the stairs. Also Harry had to wear the old clothes of his cousin. After his tenth birthday he got a place at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardy. As you can imagine this is not a normal school like the Gregor-Mendel-Realschule, but students have classes on wizardy. For example they learn transformation, History of Wizardy and Quidditch. Quidditch is similar to soccer, but it’s on brooms and in the air.
Daily life at Hogwarts school is not totally different to other schools. Harry like some teachers and others he don’t like. Harry has teachers who like him or don’t like him. There are subjects witch he is interested in and a few he isn’t. He has very good friends and of course anemies.
With his two best friends Ron and Hermione he went through many adventures and dangers.
Until now Joanne K. Rowling has written 5 books and two others are announced.


The books are very successful and million of copies are sold. Harry Potter is translated into many other languages e.g. in Chinese, Japanese, German, Arabic and so on.
When the fifth book “Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix” was released many book-shops were opened at midnight. In many countries of the world Harry Potter-Fans organised big Parties. In Germany the “Deutsche-Post” delivered the books at midnight to the readers. It was the first time that this special-service was done by the “Deutsche-Post”.
There are also three Harry Potter movies and five audio-books. You can find Harry Potter also on cups, socks, jackets and toilet-sets.

Harry Potter is not only a book for kids, but also a book for adults. This is the reason for the big success of Harry Potter.
And for me it’s the best book of the world.....and I’m not the only one.


Und noch ne Frage, wie spricht man "threatens" aus?

strietens...oder
fretens..

Im Voraus 10000000000000000000 Dank!
 

The_Great_VfB

bite niecht närven Dancke
Ich verfasse zwar 90% aller meiner emails auf englisch, aber hier kann ich dir echt licht helfen.........puh, sieht aber net schlecht aus.


cheers :hand:
 
In Germany the “Deutsche-Post” delivered the books at midnight to the readers

meiner meinung nach müsste es heissen...
"...delivered the books to the readers at midnight" ...es gibt da ja so ne regel "place before time" ... ob "to the readers" aber als ort aufgefasst werden muss? ich weiss net so genau...
 

Reddinga

Vorzeige-Papa
Be-Vau-Bee schrieb:
She is an english author. Joanne K. Rowling has written fiction since she was a child, and always wanted to be an author.

Ich glaube es heißt "has been writing fiction..."

Be-Vau-Bee schrieb:
The books are about the life of Harry Potter. Harry Potter is a wizard. When he was a baby his parents were killed by Lord Voldemort. Lord Voldemort is the most powerful black wizard since centuries.

Es heißt "Lord Voldemort was the most ... for centuries". Erklärung: since nimmt man bei genauen Zeitangaben (since 1990), "for" bei Zeiträumen (for years).

Be-Vau-Bee schrieb:
Harry like some teachers

Harry likes... and others he doesn’t like

Be-Vau-Bee schrieb:
He has very good friends and of course anemies.

enemies


So, und jetzt is gut mit meiner klugscheißerei... Ist aber gut geschrieben... Welche Klasse besuchst Du?

Gruß
Reddinga
 
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